I feel as though the text is a little tacky, perhaps a little typography applied there would suit it much better. There's tons of awesome examples of that to see here on MT. Or, just remove it entirely - its been made very clear that this guy is only looking at this girl, yknow? The rest of the wall is fine, though. I'd hate for you to feel as though this comment is entirely negative, its not my intention!
1440x900 Wallpaper
Artist Comment
Well, long time no wallie!
Yes, life has kept me busy these days with work, family and trying to write/illustrate a children's story on safety.
Not also to mention, that my old computer of 9 years finally started to die (wouldn't handle photoshop anymore) and I was a few months saving the money for a new one.
I finally had some time to get at a new wallie and since I just started watching Guilty Crown, thought, it would be easier to do one of this series rather than, spend hours trying to go through past anime (previously planned wallie list), and just do something new and current that I really liked.
I know the perspective is off a little, and it may not be high quality, so please forgive any of the flaws as I'm rusty from not walling for many many months. :)
It felt great to get at it again though!
The Wyld Stuff:
Time: 40 hrs approx
Layers: 60 plus
Started: Nov 12 2011
End: Nov 15 2011
Size: 1440 x 900 (Needed something to fit the new pc monitor size lol)
Resolution: 300
PSD Filesize: 11 mb
Optimized JPG Size: 730 kb
Tools: Intuous3 Tablet, Photoshop CS3,
Guilty Crown - Hiroyuki Yoshino © Studio Production I.G.
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jakuro Nov 16, 2011
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Kitaan Retired Moderator Nov 16, 2011
I agree that the text is really not necessary, it just makes it look like
a very low quality wall. The vector is very clean but the shading and BG look very blurry and
it dims the quality of the wall down. The cloud brushes are too rough, I'd recommend blurring them a bit
to soften them up.
It's very tricky when you use real stock and try blending them together, the wall needs work
blending better. Right now it sticks out too much even though it's got shadows on it.
Overall I like the idea but the vectoring combined with the blurry shades really kill the look of
the wall you were going for. Try working more on doing clean shades :)
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