Ehe, it's the same thing, you got some problem with your linearts, but I'm guessing you're in the process
of experimenting the shape tool do it's understandable. :)
I'm a fan of the wall's idea, but I got a bit problem with the color. Sorry. The color doesn't go well
with the big portion of dark color behind those two, that's why. That is my opinion. And the coloring on the couple
looks plain, and there's so many thing can be done with it.
Well, overall, that's my opinion. ^^
Thanks for sharing, do your best in your next wall! :)
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Read this manga yesterday, it was pretty cute. Yep!
Resources:
img - http://4.p.s.mfcdn.net/store/manga/7467/02-009.0/compressed/ucm_kokoro_botan_vol2_ch9.kokoro_botan_vol02_ch9_001.jpg
all else - shape tool
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singlemoon Sep 21, 2011
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jakuro Sep 21, 2011
Heehhh I wasnt very inspired - actually - i almost made this one out of frustration. Hey, maybe someone will like it.. and uh.. yea my lineart will always be fuzzy i dont have cs5 extended or Illustrator or anything. I dont see anything wrong with the lines but... okay. I er, I wanted it to be plain and bold - style is style whether its plain or not. I know I'm not that great at this but I enjoy doing it. ><
Thanks for the feedback - I'm not attacking you just responding to you.. when I talk people always think i'm attacking them lol
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