Wow massive. Nice coloring. I really like her atire. And for someone who has just started draawing....DAMN your skills good...even better than mine I would say...
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Well... I havent done a wallpaper in along time. Started uni this year so its taking its time i guess. I began practising drawing earlier this year and i thought of giving it a go since its a dream of mine. Im not good, I wish I was more skilled, but I have only been drawing for 8-9 months now I think so i guess I have time left to get better. Random ninja girl, I am quite happy about the cging on her, although there are some flaws. Ear is wierd, propotions in general aswell.Got any advice? Then feel free to comment, cause i want to get better :)
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Damn. I was wondering where the hell did you go?
Awesome drawing. XD
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Whoo~! *slaps massive on the back* XD Long time no see, buddy. :) Hope you're surviving alright.
Hmm... advice? XD <lol> I've only been drawing for about a year, also, so I'm in no position to be coaching, heh. In any case, there are a couple of things I noticed, so I'll just say. :) Feel free to either ignore, or poke me in the side and ask what the hell I'm talking about. xd1- her left thigh shouldn't slope downwards so much at the top. I mean, it should but... um. Should come up sooner? Like a dip before an arch, instead of a wave. Eh.
1- behind the left knee, the thigh line shouldn't cross the top of the calf - if anything, the calf should cross the end of the thigh, because it's closer (perspective-wise).
2- general figure. This could be to do with your personal style; disregard if so. :) Most drawn women have a clear, um... that -> ) . ( kind of shape to their bodies, where the hips are as wide as the shoulders. XD The males tend more to have the \ . / shape.
3- bottom cloak/tunic folds. One side (imo, the side that continues on) should not be so sharp. How to say...? Instead of going like this n from fold to fold, it should be more like this ~ at the bottom. So that the side that follows on to more material is actually smooth and doesn't look like it's been ironed into a crease. ^_^'
Arrgh! XD This sucks! I don't even understand what I've said for parts, so please PM to clarify if you need it.
Anywayus, lik Electra said, your colouring isn't bad. :) I've really no right to say anything here, because I fall back on the polygonal lasso all the time. XD
Ganbatte! Keep working on it!
___[edit] *rofl* I can't even count to two. ^_^'
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Nice drawing, I like the girl's ninja costume... err... you know like what bucket-shot said there's many deformations :sweat: Nice work on the flat-like CG style.
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