This wall is very nice!!! Good taste to make this wall.
But really you need improve it, because the grass is no good. You could put more layers (i make grass field with a 4 or 5 layers) for to give a effect of depth and to cover the ground.
When you update this wall, don't forget post in my guestbook, ok? Good luck.

i like this so much
the bg look great
and the chara also nice..
i like the overall
thx for ur effort and share it in here

ohh, pretty background Susan-chan..
I like the sparkles too, but they seem to be bunched up oddly at some spots..
and the grass looks strange, maybe if you put more it would be better, and the planet needs more width to it..
but I love the colours in this wallpaper, nice work, keep it up ^^

You MADE that planet! *chokes* i cannot belive it. Unless you show me in person i will firmy believ that the planet is simply a picture or somethin... an the rings.... the rings... are an.. optical illusion! yeah that it! an illusion! lmao! awesome wall! However, the grass? Yeah, i love the gostyness - but more layers would be awesome! Hit me up in my guestbook if you update it! A fav for sure but its not in the WP folder... yet!

This is aveyr good wall Susan.The grass is kinda odd,but you did agood attempt at it.The bg is wonderful,I really like the moon you drew(that is fantastic^uu^) and the sparkles spread throughout the wall.I think if you add more grass and detail it alittle more,and then add more sparkles you could make the wall look even better than it already is.Great work though,keep improving .

This is aveyr good wall Susan.The grass is kinda odd,but you did agood attempt at it.The bg is wonderful,I really like the moon you drew(that is fantastic^uu^) and the sparkles spread throughout the wall.I think if you add more grass and detail it alittle more,and then add more sparkles you could make the wall look even better than it already is.Great work though,keep improving .

oeeeehh.. another nice wallpaper lol ^^. hmm i agree about the grass it looks a bit odd.. maybe you shoul'd have made some more grass ^^. the star looking thingy's are pretty cool heheh ^_^. nice job!

Oh, what another cool wallie from you. Keep up the good work. It's really nice.

*thumbs up*
looks much better than before ^^
now at least you see she isn't floating, good work Susan-chan

love it looks so great...... the bg looks very good

the girl is so cute and I like her pose. A great and beautiful Memories Off wall

wow beautiful wall like the particule and grass
really nice job

wow.... The moon looks great! I like the way how you make the effects!!! ^^

so nice wallpaper you give us, thx a lot. nice background, ant the effects are really good.....

A really nice wallpaper. I like the effect and the planet. The colours are great ^^V.
And the girl has a cute smiling ^-^.

It's a very nice background you made I like the effects too
Nice work Susan-chan

ohh beautiful!!!! my fav wall from you I think the grass look so nice and very nice addition all these sparkles!! everything fit really well together!! awesome

The scan is still a bit grainy and the moon is so huge it scares me 0_0 But the sparkles, grass, and the glow on the girl is very very pretty

Keep it up~!

Nice wallpaper Susan!! The bg looks great other than some of the stuff Devilet mentioned, it's very good!
Is this one of your first scenic ones is it???
Nice job

I think this one is really nice!!!!^^

Weee!!! pretty!!! I haven't seen what the first version looks like, but this one certainly looks great!! I love the colour of the grass and those sparkles.. and nice extraction too

The beauty of this wall defies all description. The grass, Teh girl, the background... The moon I just cannot get over the perfection of this wall. The improvemnt over the first version is unmeasurable! I am extremley impressed with you never ending depths of skill! Not only does this wall earn my favorite and a revered space in my wallpaper folder, but im gonna print IT OFF! its gonna go on my wall! In my room! Bet you never exped it to be a real wallpaper!

The scan is actually really fine... it's not that grainy nor its grainy its pretty fine.... very nice background you did... nice sparkles effect and grass but isn't the moon a bit too low and huge it looks like its going to hit the ground but its pretty nice moon though great work susan-chan

It is a very nice wall. The planet in the background is looks really good, and the scan is nice too.