Very interesting idea, though it is a bit busy for my taste. The blending seems to have turned out quite nicely. My only real recommendation would be to maybe make the white text stand out a little more. Nice job! :)
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SnickerdoodleNinja Retired Moderator Jun 21, 2011
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angelxxuan Banned Member Jun 21, 2011
to be honest, it's too busy in some places, and not busy enough in others. the wording is hard to read and you can barely make out the characters in the center, it's like they are clashing with the background. overall I suppose it's alright, could have been better. remember it's protocol to have a signature somewhere on your work or it will get deleted. it's not bad for your third to have been submitted here though. if it is present I can't see it for all the color clashing :/
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ryuyasha11 Jun 21, 2011
Hmm. I will edit it with this in mind.
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Weskalia Jun 21, 2011
My original scan, how dare you ryusha11 to take it and make it into a more awesome wallpaper lol.
I like it, still has the original's look with some special effects such as the radiant mix of color and poem, or Madoka's wings.
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ryuyasha11 Jun 21, 2011
uploaded alternative version with sig, and an alternative version that i believe is less "busy" as people explained.
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Fran Retired Moderator Jun 22, 2011
I think...the text should go. Or at least rework it.
The font you picked is sort of detailed and doesn't really fit with the overall theme and there's just simply too much text using too much space of the wallpaper.
I feel typography should be a part of the wallpaper and not be like an image and text, which is, unfortunately, the case of your wall. Right now the text is not really incorporated with your wallpaper.I suggest you to look to this wallpapers for future references, I believe their use of text fits perfectly with the image they used: Yina, Valuna and Josephine's wallpapers.
Keep it up.
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ryuyasha11 Jun 23, 2011
Yeah, the blending of text was definitely not what I wanted it to be...the reason so much text is there is mainly because I couldn't bring myself to omit the second part...
I'll upload variations.
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Kefkiroth Aug 22, 2012
I've never really liked text on wallpapers. For signatures you obviously need them but I've never really liked text being one of the most prominent things on the wallpaper, but maybe that's just me.
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ryuyasha11 Aug 26, 2012
Quote by KefkirothI've never really liked text on wallpapers. For signatures you obviously need them but I've never really liked text being one of the most prominent things on the wallpaper, but maybe that's just me.
Could you upload a variation without any text in the middle?oki (it is done)
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Kefkiroth Aug 28, 2012
Thanks, really appreciate it.
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