Hehe, you forgot to post the scan's link again? Here ya go~
Illustration #14
;3
Now, to the wall - I like your colour scheme and idea. For a first-time character vector, you're actually doing
pretty good. :) I like that you kept everything lineless, it's smoother this way.
I do think it would be nicer if her eyes were filled in with some colour though, light yellow at least? A bit less
disconcerting, I think. :3 And maybe a different font for the lyrics, and more padding in between the lines..? Maybe
Segoe Print font?
An idea would be to add a drop-shadow to the lyrics, though this is just my opinion.
Still, I like eeeett~ And I'll reply to your GB when I'm done tagging and reading this bit of my notes.
^_^;
I really like the stripy leggings~