beautiful work... it's perfect for the Valentine's Day! I really like it... added on my favs.
Hi! That's Valentines Day, so I made a wall for this! Thanks to hyde333 for this so romantic scan (found on AP)!
I prefer Saito, but this picture shows real love for me, so I chose it. Before vectoring the couple I search an idea for the BG, and chose to submit 2 versions.
I tried making something calm, harmonious, sweet and warm. I vectored the japanese castle to keep the periode of the anime, and cherry blossom to keep the atmosphere of this manga.
I hope you'll like!
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SamB Feb 12, 2011
lenaelric Feb 12, 2011
Isn't it a spoiler...?
Kitaan Retired Moderator Feb 12, 2011
Are they sitting on a cherry blossom tree? Or are they so in love they're floating high above the ground?
There is no ground, actually. You might want to fix that, unless you're really trying to give this wall a magical feel.
You colored this lazy, the skin doesn't even have depth or dimension. Just looks blurred to oblivion, the petals on the top are poorly done. They look boxy and razor sharp, don't want that flying around now do we?
Really try to consider all these comments, we don't do them to be malicious or pick on you. We generally
want to help you improve and get you to see simple mistakes that you repeat over & over. It doesn't hurt to
take a few critics and do something productive with them. Hope this comment doesn't go to waste.
Kurorisa Feb 12, 2011
aside from what Kitten has said, the buildings have no shading
from what I've seen, you only use some gradients.
try to work with more time to give some nice looking wall
some of the lines are a bit jagged
and I dunno why, for me, the colors you choose for their skins don't really match with the background
aside from this, good job with the sakura petals
though it makes that there's no ground, still it gives a nice feel
snyp Feb 12, 2011
This is just too adorable ! I love the general feeling of this wall, it kinda feels like magic, fairy !
Colours are really wonderful too. However the only mistake you've done is that Valentine's day is in 2 days ;DDD
Anyway that's a fantastic work as usual ( i'm still amazed by how fast you do walls ^.^ )
Keep up the good work ! +fav !
Sakura-Dust Feb 12, 2011
I really like the way you shaded the cherry blossom tree, the layers of color are interesting, not overly detailed but just well.
The building doesn't have enough depth, seems shaded with Burn Tool, and it's odd since the rest is cell shaded.
But the part that bothers me most is Chizuru's lip. She doesn't have one. It looks as if she doesn't have a mouth at all. There's no bump, no curve, no nothing where her lip is supposed to be. It looks a bit scary.
And I agree with Kitten about the comments. We criticize your works so you can improve yourself and pay more attention to details and your style. Please take our comments into account, we mean no harm.
lenaelric Feb 12, 2011
Hm yea, I can't understand the wallpaper too... :S If they are sitting or if they are stand
kakashim Feb 12, 2011
For what I've seem most of your wallpapers look pretty much the same (especially the coloring part; always pale and dull).... Try experimenting a bit more with colors next time.
Also, is there a need for the buildings and mountains to be in perfect focus? No. Try using depth of field next time to enhance depth between the characters and BG. Blurring part for your BG doesn't always equals bad, especially when dealing with scenic type of wallpapers-scenes.
To expand, you should try experimenting a bit more next time (break out from your usual style) rather than just keep doing the same. After all, you already have +140 wallpapers with that...
AnikHasan Feb 13, 2011
I must say, Impressive! Thnx 4 sharing.
erdeteha Feb 13, 2011
what a romantic scene <3 really melancholic!
LadyZ Feb 13, 2011
Love rule the world!
Very beautiful, romantic, sincere...
Thanks for wallpaper!))))
MissDaphne Feb 13, 2011
Omg omg omg! I have been waiting for this scan to be a wallpaper, it's one of my faves between Chizuru and Hijikata. I'm so glad it was you who did it. I think it is very beautiful and even though the comments above seem to give some good constructive criticism, I like your style, and I am very glad you didn't move or change the pose. I like to think of it as in she was so excited to see him she ran over and kissed him and he's kinda lost his footing for a moment. Super romantic <3 <3 Thank you for sharing it with us :
chobits1220 Feb 14, 2011
very good work! and thanks for share.
Darktekya Feb 17, 2011
Great work! Thank you for sharing.
Weta Mar 11, 2011
so sweet and delicate! love the colours *-*
Globosa May 04, 2011
Lovely :D.....the colors are just perfect ....
Nubes May 27, 2012
what? do they actually kiss? OMG! SO INTO WATCHING THIS SCENEE! BEAUTIFUL BTW! m_m
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