his crotch is too dark...miss baasa u r too perverted. the background is darker? wtf is with ur perspective? and lighting? pfft. and the bride's pretty but damn does she have broad shoulders. she's almost a man!
whaaaaat?!?!?! nooo! it's cuz he's crouching! he's crouching! shadow! OMIGEEZS! and i'd like to see u try color pencil! fuck it! rawhhh
--later--
i'll post another version of this when i'm not lazy...i couldn't fix the girl's shoulder w/o messing up the whole thing...the poor man will marry the man-shoulder woman... but he seems happy