I'm not sure what those shadows are supposed to be - tree leaves shadows? - but the overall lighting looks rather flat and as usual, everything lacks depth. Look at some of the photos to see how to create proper lighting/depth - vectoring lines and adding a few layers of shadows/highlights is not enough if you want to create something like this and anything else in general. Speaking of lines, some lines also look very jagged and too sharp. I suppose you still refuse to listen to all the advices people are giving you about vectoring using Bezier curves...
Artist Comment
Hi!
Thanks to DarkAliaz for this excellent vector (found on AP)!
Shinku is so cute on this!
So I wanted to create a sweet wall with this.
I chose to insert her in grass, like she's tooking a nap under a tree. I tried to make a sweet and warm atmosphere,
as if we could hear the birds singing... so I emphasized on light, shadows (especially the tree), contrast and
saturation to do something harmonious and peaceful.
I hope you'll enjoy!
Cilou
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Alenas Retired Moderator Jul 29, 2010
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Kurorisa Jul 29, 2010
most of the things I want to say are already said by alenas
the grass looks too stiff, they should have more variations. not only in the straight position.
and not only the shapes, I think you could make more variations to the color.
I think you blurred too much flower petals.
that's the only thing I can think about. aside from that, I think you could make more details and depths to the wall next time :] -
Kitaan Retired Moderator Jul 29, 2010
I agree with the two above, the grass looks like it's flying by her
rather than her resting in it. And where the grass goes over her, it looks like glass.
You really would've have been better looking at some stock photos, or just choosing
something less complicated. The shadows look more like bunch up cotton candy, you could
have taken a tree brush and set it on overlay or softlight to get a perfect shadow.
And yes, as Alenas mentioned...you're making walls awfully fast again. Be careful it doesn't get too messy, take your time and have fun with it.
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lenaelric Jul 29, 2010
That's true. You're making your wallpaper very fast. You should learn to make more things and put another things. Your wallpapers are cute but sometimes a bit simple and it looks like only a vector.
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MoonFangs90 Jul 30, 2010
I like this wallpaper. I love the way you made tree shadings over her and I love the grass although it looks a little strange to me but I like it, quite confusing uh?
Anyways Lovely wallpaper ? -
Longshankz Aug 18, 2010
Very simple, but great work. Love the emotion in this one. Keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing.
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xScarlet Sep 04, 2010
Aww, how cute~ The grass looks weird, but that's not that important in my opinion. Thanks for uploading.
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missmurderdoll Mute Member Sep 12, 2010
Beautiful wallpaper, i love it
thanks! -
hinatsui-chan Sep 27, 2010
I love Rozen Maiden.
Shinku is my favorite character.
Wallpaper is beautiful. -
luaoc Mute Member Dec 07, 2010
Very nice! Thanks for sharing!
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ksjz Dec 11, 2010
q linda shinku :) buen trabajo
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kuro-chi413neko19 Mar 08, 2011
SHINKU IS SOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE IN THIS POSITION!?
merged: 03-08-2011 ~ 01:21pm
THE FLOWER PETALS ARE A PERFECT TOUCH AS WELL!? -
vitaanimax Apr 25, 2011
shinku so cute.....................so so cute
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