Romeo x Juliet Wallpaper: A Love to be Framed

I'm starting to think that my wallpapers are better looking from a distance than when full-viewed. *sigh* I'm not particularly happy with this one; I kind of pictured it a different way. I had these wonderful looking brushes to use, but they turned out to be too small. So, I was forced to change things around a little - not for the better, I fear. :/

Once I put everything together with the new brushes, I wasn't liking the colors that much, nor the lighting. I kept experimenting with different light angles till the one I thought appeared best. However, after I did that, the render kept giving me problems by pixelating in certain areas. I was forced to smudge up some of the places, and I tried to add depth like a portrait by blurring some of the edges of the render. But, maybe that made it to0 soft looking compared to the actual 'background'....

Anyway, I hope it doesn't look too bad. Also, comments are always welcome!