Awesome work -- color excellent, the only downside -- and this is due to the source you worked from is kagome's face looks elongated, but other than that (which, the only way you could have addressed that, would have been to perform a *much* more complicated "repair" of that part of the source drawing as you re-used it -- to correct the proportions). It could be a tricky mod, too -- since to back her lips back toward the back of her head, would also back them away from their intended target (Inu).
Only way to probably do it would be to move the hold back of her head forward about the length of her nose. As it is, it sorta looks like her face is stretching out to try to kiss his -- something appropriate if she had a stretchy face...:-)
(Sorry, I have to pick at something, and I doubt I would have done nearly as well, so take what I say with a grain of sand!),
Your use of color and the texture are wonderfully smooth. The colors are very good with respect to accuracy to the series.
A+ and added to my favorites!
More please!
:-)
