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well...i drew this on a day that i had no homework...(yesterday)..and..well...

critique it please, and critique it hard.

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  1. FlowerDog Sep 16, 2004

    I am not much of a critique but I thought the shape of the bottom part of her dress could have been more rounded. But, I also believe that it looks good as the way it is. Not everyone has the same taste but as long as the drawing matches then it's perfect to me. Keep it up Shiiken. :)

  2. miyuna Sep 19, 2004

    i think here eyes are a bit to far apar, the left eye is a bit high, work on making ur ppl fatter, n_n''', and maybe you can try to make clothes seem less stiff? mayb ther eyebrows can be a bit higher above the eyes.

  3. tuxedotservo Jan 10, 2005

    The eyes seem a bit far apart, as someone else noted.
    Also, even with the angle of viewing, the nose doesn't appear to be aligned with the mouth. It appears to be *just a tinny bit* to her right of center. I admit it could be part of the viewing angle, however.

    Other than that little bit, it's really good.

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