:) Hey! Thin pointy angular style. xD
I also really like the pose. Something delicate about it. She looks mysterious. :P
Anyway, some advice/tips:
It comes with simply drawing a lot, but you could really use more confidant lines. It doesn't really have to do
with "sketchy" style, but by how confidant each stroke is. (I'm hardly the best person to talk to about
lines... but I know them when I see them. haha)
check out Janaschi's
sketchbook. Linked particularly to this page for the line sketches... such confidant lines. *okay I'm rambling
now. >_> but I admire her*
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too much ramble! Anyway, what I'm getting at is don't be afraid to make strong, darker lines, even if
you're not sure how to draw something! Also, try to watch proportions... even stylized anatomy is still relatively
proportional (like elbows reach roughly the waist, etc...) Also, don't draw the limbs so straight and also think of
the structure of the body underneath. Study anatomy. You don't have to memorize everything, but at least have an
idea of what people look like when you rip off their skin. (or at least nekkid. Serious, btw).
Ah, hope I didn't scare you. o_0