This is the first wallpaper I've ever made. I did it with "The Gimp".
In this wp I try to get the 2 faces of Chise, the sweet little girl that have fall in love and the ultimate
weapon.
It takes me about 10H to finish because I was learning how to use "The Gimp" while doing it, besides I'm not sure if it is alright, anyway, hope you like it and that you give me some feedback because I wan't to improve my wall skills and the only way to do that is to receive the advices that you have to give me ^_^
I get the scans from:
http://www.icomic.com
http://individual.utoronto.ca/gfx/saikano/
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Hey.. I will get an extra-cookie to be the first poster.. :)
i like the two color scheme in your wall. I only regret that the angel has some feathers cut (too high) and it seems
it's not fully vertical (but that's my sight and my opinion)..
.. but it's definitely a keeper..
chise is so cute^^
Cute, but the yellow...hmm...maybe if you used the red clouds...? But still a new layout...maybe another version? XD
Wow..Awsome Job For n First wall!..i really like this one..maybe bcuz i'ma a Saikano Fan ; ) ...
i like the color scheme!..Very nice concept and quality =D....great job..make more saikano ;p
a very fitting piece for the series, well done.
This is a first effort? Wow, you have some real talent, espcially learning The Gimp along the way! I can barely saturate a polygon in Photoshop....
The comments about the feathers and the alignment are good ones. I'm also not sure that saturating the background with yellow works all that well, but what you've done is excellent with good billowing clouds and color blends. It all comes down to personal choice. If you decide to do another one with a different bg, I'd love to see it. Beautifully done, Hikarujm!
wow
that really ur first wp.??? :o
with the GIMP....
great job^_^
well some suggestion.
the angel should be more blend with the bg
let the point of the wing blur more with the yellow BG.
give it a white shades that will look that it really like it fly
the lower part just great job..
well if u use photoshop i can advice more..
first wall... very good.
try to keep the black bars /if you have them/ the same size and the english text just a bit more readable.
but really love the idea and feel to the wall... keep em coming
well done :D i like the transition from the sweet scene<3 to the flying overhead weapon, really dramatic :D
yeah the english text needs to be more readable
i'm not really into the black border style, it looks like it's a screen...or an 8 mm camera was used (wooo good movie 8 mm ) lol
anyway still a fab job :D great job for a first wall. ya shoulda seen mine XD yuck lol
hmm... not sure what to say about this one. I'm a bit neutral toward it. One thing that somewhat bugs me in it is how the girl is bigger than the shadows below her, while they seem to be under same perspective level - I hope that makes sense. The other thing that you might consider in future compositions is to avoid placing object in the middle of the canvas, human eye like diversity and middle placment don't offer that. Overall it's a nice attempt. :)
Thanks for the comments, now I feel more sure of what to do in the 2nd version. :)
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...i'm not really into the black border style, it looks like it's a screen...or an 8 mm camera was used (wooo good movie 8 mm ) lol...
That was the effect that I want, thanks for notice :D
I <3 Saikano, 2 Awesome :-)
The comments about the feathers and the alignment are good ones.
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