The background looks great, but the vector needs a lot of work. I know you said this is your second, which it is good for a second. And they'll only get better with more practice. I just want to point out a few things for your next that you should watch out for. Firstly, the line art. Some areas have line art and some don't. And it looks sloppy. Also, watch your curves, right now they are very angular and not smooth. Read up on some tutorials for the pen tool, maybe you'll come across some useful tricks. The coloring in the hair is also very choppy (it looks like you have anti-aliasing turned off). Lastly, I don't think the color of the font you used really matches the wallpaper. Maybe try something that better blends in with the background.
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Another vector XD ,this take me like 2 days ,the hardest part was the hair so I finished making it more simple.
I used like 92 layers
credits for the author of the image
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xAnime4Lifex Apr 20, 2009
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animelover901120 Apr 22, 2009
This look cute...
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daniticha Oct 10, 2009
Kyoko! woooo Thanks for this wall! Looks great!
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XiThau Nov 14, 2009
If he was a girl, I'm sure he'd be Haruhi's girlfriend. [Jk]
But okay, She is too cute. Too hot, whatever term you want to use.
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Mononoke-Hime Nov 25, 2009
great job. this looks awesome. thank you
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erickmarlon28 Mar 22, 2010
muchas gracias por el aporte ...xD!
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AznBoyy19 Jun 08, 2010
i love haruhi with long hair XD!
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wjdah7017 Mute Member Jan 16, 2011
Oh! It's nice ! Thanks for sharing it !
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