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Original: Advarielle's Works 01

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This is the first drawing I submitted, so please don't be too hard on me, okay? I hope you can tell me how to fix this drawing because I have so many problems with it like the jaggy lines (You can see it by zooming in at it), really teribble colour (I suck at colouring, huh), and the head is too big (Its just terrible...). So, I really hope if you senpai can help me, I really appreciate it, thank you very much.

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  1. TrigunPreacherGirl Jun 14, 2009

    I really like how her pose is more than just one gesture or expression. If you feel that you need to work on color, I suggest just going with what feels right. Pull out some colors that work well for you, and go well together. Try making more than one copy of the drawing (such as tracing it or copying it off a printer), and using those colors on each. Feel free to experiment with different shades.
    Personally, I feel that the head is just fine in regard to proportion, but just keep practicing. You can also look at reference pictures online, in magazines, or do some subtle people-watching.
    Her hairstyle's just adorable, and I can tell you're a fan of Gainax, aren't you? ^_^. Nicely done, all in all.
    ~"TreaGirl".

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