Almost perfect, but I'm an ass when it comes to typos...
"It's all begin when I saw you. And then all started together... Love, friendship, and betrayal"
You might want to change it to "It all began when I saw you. And then, everything started together... Love,
friendship, and betrayal"
Other then that, a mighty fine wallpaper you made there ^^
If you decide to change that line, let me know through PM and I'll be happy to grab the wall (again) ;-)
