Wow, nice piece Crystal! Beautiful job on the yukata pattern and colors! I also commend you on her hands. Nice job on getting them proportional, but I think the joints could be a little more round. (At least on the left hand.) I've just gotta say this is a very strong first? (or second...) piece and it shows a LOT of promise. Hope to see more from you soon! :D
Artist Comment
This is my original art work... I do this with gel pen and color pencil
I'm a 'lil nervous here, coz this is my firs submission... I hope nothing wrong... ^_^'
Well... I have a lot story on my hard drive, and this is one of many character I had made... Her name is Hoku, so it explained why the title is "Hoku no Tanabata" ;)
Och, no one would listen to my jabber... ENJOY! :nya:
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fireflywishes Retired Moderator Feb 17, 2009
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windyroller Feb 17, 2009
Very nicely done. Good to see more pencil work on here. :D Watch out for those 3/4 views with the eyes. Her right eye looks a little awkward... (The iris seems too thin.)
Still, good job! Hope to see more from you!
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MizuuHime Feb 25, 2009
Hwaai.... Look what the others comments your drawing ^ ^
They said nice job.... And I will say that too, for you! ^ ^
Fight, Na!
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DarthTofu Mar 01, 2009
Nice, nice. :) Yeah, great job with the hands!
Her expression's a little weird, she seems overly tired or something. Also, her forehead's really small, like the top of her head is squashed. Other than those issues, though, it's really a very nice piece. :)
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