Rizel.......Mmmmmh
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T_T i had such great expectations for this wall...
after literally days of days of starting something then deleting this is what i've finished with. looks like a pile of crap if you ask me. and i'm not trying to be modest, it is ugly.
hopefully i'll get some good suggestions and change it, give it a full make over and then maybe it'll look ok.
try not to look at the bottom half, works better that way
EDIT: yeah i forgot to put those petals in, yeah i forgot. it was in the original plan but it got out some how. i also put the text in. it looks fine enough
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Fridzouille Jul 04, 2004
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macross Aug 12, 2004
is too cute, lovely wall
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dragondiv1 Banned Member Jan 07, 2005
It is very attractive one full of life animated!
And the wallpaper is really beautiful!
I like!
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K4N3 Mute Member Jul 10, 2005
OK you asked for some critism on this wall and I think I can see what it is you yourself didn't like. The flowers are great, the clouds are great, the char is great.
The biggest problem I can see is that the flowers look like they're on lines (and could use a little shadow detail themselves). A little more random and it would be great. Don't be affraid of having empty patches of grass, you can texture it and detail it as grass. Also while the text fits the feeling of the wall it might have been better to use a Wacom Tablet rather than a mouse or even to find a font that you like and use that.
All in all it is a good wall.
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rikaspain Apr 09, 2006
ohh in this page thara are some rizelmine´s pictures :
http://groups.msn.com/anime-tenshi
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