been seeing your work around lately on cg, and since i started out on CG as well i thought i might give some pointers =]
lol and when i first started i really wanted to vector this but then got LAZY XDD
your lineart is and has always been quite nice, although i think that you tend to make the mouths a bit too thick, try
your own "style" of drawing them i guess is what i want to say because usually scans use painting combined
with lines to get an effect. since you didnt paint i think its better just to go thinner. i say the facial features
should get a bit more attention from you as well. i mean i just say this because most of what people look at anyways is
the face
think about the lineart in the hair more carefully, the ends of the hair really make or break out it looks i think so
its always nicer to make it as tapered as possible.
you did a great job with the clothes! i love them, although i think they could do without the blurred shadows.
great job and i hope to see more from you soon XD