yay! i've been waiting for something from you. i seriously thought from the thumbnail that you had just extracted the scan and i was like wtf is she doing?! really nicely done, and i love the pattern on the outlines--i was experimenting with that myself for my first wall but looks like you beat me to it.
i think you need to lighten the shading on his face or smudge it a little bit more. everything else is amazing, from the funky outlining to the texture on the clothes and the lovely colors that really replicate the manga scan's feel. great job (as always) XD