I think you should have added some shadings on the window and on the glass too..this way it looks strange...also,I think
the texture of the wall stands out too much...and that you should have made the clouds a bit lighter...they look really
unrealistic...and also...the text on the piano is too bright...I think XD
But I really liked the idea of this wall,and the style chrarcter is drawn...
Artist Comment
This is my very first wallpaper ^^
Copy paste from AP:
Program used: Ulead Photoimpact (it's not as popular as Photoshop, so many of you might never have heard of
it)
Layers: 30-40
Idea: It is evening, and Eyes is in his room. For those who have never watched the series before, Eyes is a pianist, hence the piano in the room ^^ The sun is shining into the room through the window, and the sky is reddish purple in colour. I tried to make the room feel as English/Victorian as possible, and the deco in the room too^^ The original floor was made of tiles, but I changed it to a carpet because as a pianist myself, I know how irritating it is to have sounds bouncing off the floor each time I play the piano. At first, I forgot to add the piano stool (XD) until fayt19 reminded me of it...thanks~~ (How is Eyes going to play the piano without a stool to sit on? *Idiocy on my part*)
The title 'Picturesque' was given because everything in the wall is so still, like Eyes is preparing to take a photo of himself. Or rather, I'm the one taking it |(n_n)|
I guess that's all. I welcome any suggestions, comments and critiques to help me make this wall better.
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christabel92 Sep 06, 2008
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Idril Sep 07, 2008
Not bado for your first wall! ^^
keep it up!
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ravenqueen Sep 09, 2008
you did really good for this to be your first. i like it
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Zorpatchi Oct 10, 2008
This was wonderful! I've been looking for something like this for a very, very, very long time!
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kakyuuchan Nov 18, 2008
wah, looks really awesome. thankyou for this ^ _ ^
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