It's a good doujinshi. You've done a good job with the design, and the colour/shading works are great. However, you've ruined that good drawing right at the end with a low JPEG quality. If you notch it up to 10 or 12, it should look much better, because right now, there seems to be quite a few JPEG artefacts. If that's not the case, then perhaps you enlarged something you shouldn't have :P But good job on the artwork :)
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3 of them is my OC: Aoi, Boma, and Fakhrul
Boma and Fakhrul is from Indonesia.
Never ever had experience winter, just the air conditioner ^_^
one day they spent their holiday to a winter country.
And felt terribly cold.
In this picture, they both said 'I never though that winter is THIS cold. I'm freezing!'
uhmm.. just a christmas picture for you guys who watched me ^^; and a bit of wanted to draw something not cool.
and tried to learn some picking color.
and also trying again my bamboofun ^_^
I finish this around 3-4 days, total around 24 hours
edited, adding highlight and text in photoshop
And still this is a mess ~_~ if its viewed in a bigger size you can see all the mess I had made >_<
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euna Retired Moderator Jul 09, 2008
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ernn Jul 09, 2008
Quote by eunaIt's a good doujinshi. You've done a good job with the design, and the colour/shading works are great. However, you've ruined that good drawing right at the end with a low JPEG quality. If you notch it up to 10 or 12, it should look much better, because right now, there seems to be quite a few JPEG artefacts. If that's not the case, then perhaps you enlarged something you shouldn't have :P But good job on the artwork :)
thanks for the comment and critique.
I'll upload it in a middle quality for the next art :) -
Anjhurin Sep 27, 2008
Ahah, i love the scene you depicted, it's really funny. Great coloring, and the characters' expressions are great, but the whole pic is really blurry (scan problems ?).
Anyway, keep it up :D
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