Original Doujinshi
Bubbly
Bubbly
By gel-chan
- Submitted:
- 26wk 4d ago by gel-chan
- Category:
- Original
- Official Creator:
- Type:
- Doujinshi
- Resolution:
- 832x1,152
- Size:
- 94 kB
- Views/Downloads:
- 358/13
- Comments/Favorites:
- 8/4
Don't let the title fool you. This drawing isn't inspired by Colbie Calliat's
song, Bubbly. The girl's got bubblegum thats why. 
Hiya guys! Its been almost a year since I've submitted anything! Can you believe
that? Anyways about this drawing... I drew this at my guy's house, it was out of
the blue. After finishing this doujin, that's when I realized I was actually
chewing gum. Weird huh? Never mind the guy at the back, I drew him so the doujin
wouldn't look so empty. 
Time Elapsed: 30 minutes
Tools Used: Regular Pencil, Ink Pen (for the first time!)
Comments are greatly appreciated! 
Gel~ 
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Kulayan Mo.
Kulayan Mo.
Kulayan Mo.
Kulayan Mo. Grr.
May mali akong nakikita, pero bago magkamali-mali ang katawan ko, este magkanda-bali bali ang buto ko, di ko na point yun
/joke
Anyways, for a first-time ink (and the first time I saw a work of yours during the period I became a member of MT), your lines are reaaaaaaallllllllyyyyy clean. (yeah, DLed it.) Almost a lot of neophyte (and in rare cases, veteran... okaaay, why are you looking at me? D:) artists have trouble with proportions, but what I see here is that there's something wrong with the face (don't worry, she's cute, and rather looks like you, lol). There are some things here too, but the face caught my attention. Cool details, although my real comment (after this lenghty scrap wording
)
is:
Kulayan Mo.
Kulayan Mo.
Kulayan Mo. Grr. :P
P.S. Ikaw ba yan? Di ka naman cute ah? o.O /joke
My first impression when I saw this was, "ooh, she's cute."
My
second was that it is very good. It's neat and clean (something I envy you for
), and I like her eyes, they're very clear. There is something off
about the face, as shinshin pointed out, but I can't quite figure out what it
is. Regardless, it's not too great that it detracts from the picture, so it gets
favored!
I can point out the mistakes, but I ain't pro. Besides, I don't want to suffer broken bones if ever I decide to show myself on any anime expo in the Philippines, baka andun ka eh, upakan mo pa ako.
/joke
There's always a room for improvment. Ibalik mo yung kumekembot. /joke
30 mins? ang bilis nun ah.
Try to add some shadings on the clothes.
You
need to fix her head (proportion). 
Nice work! you're really good! My work at least takes me 2 weeks, but this is really good!
great use of lines! good work!
Pretty ^^
very very prety