The background is really cool and same with the layout of the characters, but I think there is a little too much text
and the English stuff doesn't really make sense. The sentence on the left has a comma in it, but the sentence on the
right doesn't, even though the sentence structure is the same. Maybe either put a comma after "come," or don't
use any. Also the sentence about the corpse is a little awkward. Maybe "worthy of the corpse" refers to
something in the manga (since I have no idea what the manga is about O.o ), but I don't know..
There is also some spots of white from the original background on the guy on the right.
And sorry for being so critical. >_<
The background is very cool though!
:)