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Original: The girl. And the other girl

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hello.
C & C is gladly appreciated and needed.

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  1. GaiJiN Dec 27, 2007

    You have some nice strokes and an expressive style. Try to keep those qualities while working on key parts like the face. Keep it your style but the way you draw profiles needs some work. By improving small parts like the flow of the hair the picture will gain a lot, and also balance the whole thing, which is really important in b&w.
    Ah almost forgot, you got some nice texture with your cross-hatch, keep it up!

  2. acid-awakening Dec 29, 2007

    Ahh poko, you submit doujins weekly ah? I've been so lazy lately XD
    Again here there are inbalancements (if thats a word) in the tones. You did your clothes very well except the skin and hair are so flat. Other than that GJ

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