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Original: Atarashiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Artist Comment

Atarashii means "new" in Japanese(sorry my writting looks so bad ^_^'). I mean this one looks really different from everything I've drawn in this last 2 or 3 months perhaps, since I first started to draw in Hiro-san's style (and have had a great failure T_T). Well, this one was drawn in my true real style anyway, that's why I want to deny it. I'm only feel proud of the hair, I love my every single hair, it's totally PERFECT :D :D :D :D :D. I've doing hair like this since I saw White Phoenix's (someone in Vietnam sure knows her). I just thought it was nice, so I did it too, and it looked cool :D :D :D

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Comments

  1. Azusa-san Restricted Member Nov 30, 2007

    It looks better this way - thise scanning things killed the colors - it looks twinkling
    http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z115/Hippo1993/Nov30_23.jpg

  2. acid-awakening Nov 30, 2007

    The drawing is too flat, the hair unbalances your drawing

  3. Kukuru Dec 02, 2007

    You've done the hair very nicely Azusa-san - but as acid-awakening points out, because you have practically no other detail in the doujinshi, it stands out a wee bit too much.

    Personally I love detailed eyes, so I think even if you added a little eye detail it would help to balance it out. Actually, hair (I think anyways) is hard to get to stand out as well as you did, so why not take it that extra step further and add depth to to other parts of the drawing! A bit of shading/cross hatching to show some volume in her arms/legs. Perhaps even in some of the folds in the clothes...

    Your outline is nice - now it's time to build up on it :)

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