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yup one of my sad attempts to draw... c&c welcomed

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  1. seigneur Apr 05, 2004

    Seigneur
    That's a very good drawing
    Greg

  2. mr-freakybig Apr 05, 2004

    JAsmine: c&c welcomed

    ..COmmand and Conquer Welcomed? heheheh. :)
    This isn't an attemp btw, it is a succession . You draw very well.
    Id like to see this one coloured too . if you have the time o course

  3. david2331 Apr 05, 2004

    This is a nice drawing, you are too modest.

  4. Voracle Apr 08, 2004

    too modest indeed... I don't see ANYthing wrong with it.

    [looks again]

    Yes... you're way too modest

  5. Jimbo007 May 16, 2004

    WOW! It's amazing. "...sad attempts..." I think most people would love to be as talented as you. Keep it up. However, if i had to make one critique i would have to say a little shading might be nice.

  6. gendo1 May 30, 2004

    That's freakin awesome, such proportions.. it's like professional stuff on up and in here. Nice job!

  7. hikarujm Aug 19, 2004


    I didn't see anything wrong with it, if this is a sad attempt then I really want to take a look at a good one XD

    You manage the proportions of the body quite good, and you have a good stroke, besides I like the way in which you insinuate the body leting some lines out!!

    L love the pose of the character and the serenity of her expression!!

  8. sharley Sep 15, 2004

    A really simple pic (yeah, wish I could draw something like that). The girl has perfect figure.

  9. minakomel Apr 29, 2005

    ahem....sad attempts?
    it´s beautiful.....somehow, reminds me of Akemi Takada's sketches for Kimagure Orange Road...

  10. Rikimaru-jp Sep 22, 2005

    Well Jaz your attempt was successfully done ;)this doujin is really sexy and not to mention Ecchi and you know how much I like Ecchi :)
    I like the way she's standing so quiet and she seems like in love XP
    her body poliguones are professionally done and I really mean it because you managed to make her body swings like a real one ;)
    i like how her hair scatters so beautiful :)
    great work Jaz :) can't wait to see your next work!!!

  11. DarkIngram Nov 04, 2005

    This doujin is very nice... I see your potential here... :)

    I love her pose, she's so sexy... XD and her face... so pretty...

    The details of her hair is nicely done...

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