Original Doujinshi
slave girl
slave girl
By yoshimitsu
- Submitted:
- 50wk 3d ago by yoshimitsu
- Category:
- Original
- Official Creator:
- Type:
- Doujinshi
- Resolution:
- 1,700x2,270
- Size:
- 627 kB
- Views/Downloads:
- 350/24
- Comments/Favorites:
- 8/8
hi how ya doin!
thanks for wiewing my new submission! you know i always appreciate a comment or
two so please feel free to tell me what you think of it 
anyway the drawing is a concept art for my very own storyline that i made. its
about an extinct race of chicken people 
anyways im sure feeling positive today so how bout this: the 100th person to comment gets to request a drawing from
me
so keep those comments coming coz i just love reading them
:pacman: (im in for a disappointment aren't i?) 
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All I've gotta say is "chicken people"?
Well, here's comment #1! Lovely doujin (as always, yoshimitsu)... I always like seeing your new pieces and how much you improve from one to the next. Nice job on the inking, but it could still be a little smoother, especially on the guy's cape. Keep up the great work!
Well, I am not 100th but second should ...oh, never mind!
great doujinshi! Youre getting better and better!
This is lovely! Very nice composition, excellent expressions on the faces, nice detail, great work!
Very interesting... is one of the pens a reddish brown hue and the other more a blue-black on purpose? It's an interesting contrast. On closer looking the lines seem a little rough in places like the top around the dangling cords. The composition is very nice, but I keep looking at the girl's bangs and trying to put it together... What is bangs and what is eyelash, or eyebrow? It's an interesting effect but in a composition like this, implied lines hurt my head.
I have come across your pictures for the first time and i wanted to say in general u r good
keep
it up!
In this particular picture the (slave) girl is the jewel of this work. I love how u drew her pose and expression.
Nice lineart, but i think it lacks details and the background is a bit sketchy (the outline is a bit thin in some places) and doesn't have much perspective either.
As for the characters, they're very well drawn, the proportions are good and the clothes / accessories quite imaginative, but i think the guy's pants lack details (they're really 'blank'). Also, both characters's eyes are not level with each other (for the guy, his left eye is lower than his right) or of the same size (for the girl, her left eye seems smaller and maybe too far apart).
Anyway, nice job, it ought to be colored
man i love this
keep it up
Out all the original pieces of art I've had the pleasure to view this is in the top ten. Most people It seems have to base there are off of an existing one first and it makes me proud to see real artists in the world today.