aiba aiba aiba aiba aiba aiba! *drools*
okay i bet people think i'm nuts... this has nothing to do with aiba except for the title! XD
anyway, your lines are not really that smooth... uneven so to say.
since you refuse to tell me the name of that character i shall just call it unknown black creature XD
that unknown black creature looks like you didn't vector well.-.-"
colour leakages ne?... uhh like spots here and there.
haha go work on the outline ma'am! XD