interesting shading on her coat and face, though the darkest shading of the skin looks too red/orange. the background, first of all, the colour contrasts too much with her red coat. she's already quite vivid, so the background should be more faded colours to make her stand out instead of competing with her. try using a more grey-ish shade of blue. and I'm not sure why, but there's random pixels around her...
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Hi everyone,
I'm back, and this time I've a personal work done.. As I love vector art, I tried to do some practice with Rin of Fate Stay Night.. I'm glad that such a vectoring category exists, because I'm not so satisfied with the background (please if you have any advice to turn my vector in a nice wallpaper, I'll be ready to follow it). I hope you'll appreciate my first work.. I found the scan here in minitokyo, I didn't do anything special, but vectorising it, but any comment is welcome as ever ^^
Bye
Uffy-chan ;)
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MapleRose Retired Moderator Aug 09, 2007
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uffy-chan Aug 09, 2007
Hi,
thanks for your comment ^^ I'll try to follow your advice concerning the background.. Did you see the image in full-view? I see pixels too, but in my original image (1600x1200) there are no pixels..thanks again for your help, you're very nice
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Saikusa Retired Moderator Aug 11, 2007
Brave attempts at colouring, but it's a little like a jigsaw puzzle that doesn't quite fit together with gaps in-between the pieces.
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