oh rythem. i wont critique the arm. :P
actually, i find this submission a refreshing change from your other doujins..
it's very mellow and basic manga style. the only thing that irks me is her face. i'm not too sure why, but i'll let it slide the whole thing give me a warm fuzzy feeling.

They look so cute~
I wish I can draw as good as you~
I always love your doujinshis~ ><

Looks like a scene captured from a romance drama. I love it! Your command of the mechanical pencil is jaw-dropping!

im quite an amateur so im not too sure if im correct...
the guy's expression is abit weird.. looks to me as if he's only looking straight at smth else. maybe it'll look more 'natural' if u tilt his chin downwards

fine hair detailing as always!

It looks so touching ^^

Waaaaa
Lovely
Love the way her skirt moves in the wind.
And the background . . . .the background is just excellent! I soooo like what you did on some of those . . amm. . . ammm . . .forgot what they are called . . .you know what I mean . . I love them
And the scene . . . waaaaaa . . . I really wanna know what he just told her!
And I love how you shaded their hair and their eyes . . . and . .and . . .
I really like the whole pic

By the way . . his hand is just fine :P

Hey, that's pretty cute rythem. I like the girl's top & the hair is good

I don't like the boy's collar :< I have to say, sorry. But otherwise it's really clean, I like that, well done! :>

that's so sweet O_O
so preettty as always
I love the sepia tone here
no crit from me ~

@_@ Oh my...your art is
amazing~

........you are the mother Teresa, your the pope, you are god......

Sooo Sweet! Ur awesome + ur art is awesome! <3
Give me ur skills

Cute! Another beautiful piece of work from rythem-chan!
The details and shading are amazing! The girl is simply adorable!
Amazing work! I love it!

It's one of the most beautiful drawings I've ever seen!
I love it!

The background, the girl's and boy's outfits, expressions are so perfectly done!

Fav from me!

how old are you ? i no tht is a lttl odd to ask but im just starting to draw so i would like to no if its to late or if i should be as good as u by now ? if u thnk its to prsnl just tell me how long it took u to get tht good ?

I have yet to comment on a picture, that is how compeling this drawing is. I just love good ol' fashioned sketches, but I kind of dislike couples drawings, yet I still love this picture! Confused? It means the sketch is great!

its not his arm, its her arm ~ lol . it looks looong.. hawhaw and it doesn't seem as if he's looking at her but a point above her head, rofl ~~ favs though for sketchy-goodess XC