oh rythem. i wont critique the arm. :P
actually, i find this submission a refreshing change from your other doujins..
it's very mellow and basic manga style. the only thing that irks me is her face. i'm not too sure why, but
i'll let it slide the whole thing give me a warm fuzzy feeling. :D
Artist Comment
augh agfhd I haven't submitted anything for a while D: *busybusy*
pleaaaseee do not crit on his arm . I know it looks bad ;-;
this was a commission (from someone at DA) , but it needed some minor changes , so I'm redrawing it and submitting this one .
mechanical pencil 0.5 , PSCS2 for a bit editing and colours . 3 hours maybe .
<3
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asianspirit Jul 09, 2007
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temarigenius Jul 10, 2007
They look so cute~
I wish I can draw as good as you~
I always love your doujinshis~ >< -
Shkira Jul 10, 2007
Looks like a scene captured from a romance drama. I love it! >_< Your command of the mechanical pencil is jaw-dropping!
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pokomotto Jul 10, 2007
im quite an amateur so im not too sure if im correct...
the guy's expression is abit weird.. looks to me as if he's only looking straight at smth else. maybe it'll look more 'natural' if u tilt his chin downwards -
chisaikame Jul 10, 2007
fine hair detailing as always! :D
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redangel6112 Jul 11, 2007
It looks so touching ^^
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Peezhoun Jul 12, 2007
Waaaaa
Lovely :D
Love the way her skirt moves in the wind.
And the background . . . .the background is just excellent! I soooo like what you did on some of those . . amm. . . ammm . . .forgot what they are called . . .you know what I mean . . I love them :D
And the scene . . . waaaaaa . . . I really wanna know what he just told her!
And I love how you shaded their hair and their eyes . . . and . .and . . .
I really like the whole pic :DBy the way . . his hand is just fine :P
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studio Jul 12, 2007
Hey, that's pretty cute rythem. I like the girl's top & the hair is good :)
I don't like the boy's collar :< I have to say, sorry. But otherwise it's really clean, I like that, well done! :>
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ayaki Jul 14, 2007
that's so sweet O_O
so preettty as always :D
I love the sepia tone here
no crit from me ~ -
pamkips Jul 16, 2007
@_@ Oh my...your art is
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darkelohim Jul 18, 2007
........you are the mother Teresa, your the pope, you are god......
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angelgirlz Jul 19, 2007
Sooo Sweet! Ur awesome + ur art is awesome! <3
Give me ur skills XD -
heavens-Dragon Aug 27, 2007
Cute! Another beautiful piece of work from rythem-chan!
The details and shading are amazing! The girl is simply adorable!
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KawaiiCardcaptorSakura Aug 30, 2007
It's one of the most beautiful drawings I've ever seen! :o
I love it! :DThe background, the girl's and boy's outfits, expressions are so perfectly done!
Fav from me! ;)
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DarkSurface Sep 24, 2007
how old are you ? i no tht is a lttl odd to ask but im just starting to draw so i would like to no if its to late or if i should be as good as u by now ? if u thnk its to prsnl just tell me how long it took u to get tht good ?
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ShadeX Oct 25, 2007
I have yet to comment on a picture, that is how compeling this drawing is. I just love good ol' fashioned sketches, but I kind of dislike couples drawings, yet I still love this picture! Confused? It means the sketch is great!
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ventures Dec 05, 2007
its not his arm, its her arm ~ lol . it looks looong.. hawhaw and it doesn't seem as if he's looking at her but a point above her head, rofl ~~ favs though for sketchy-goodess XC
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