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Original Doujinshi

~~~~++{HoLyFighter}++~~~~

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~~~~++{HoLyFighter}++~~~~

By mecphistor

 Original Doujinsh
© 2007 - 2008 ~ mecphistor

 
Submitted:
1y 14wk ago by mecphistor
Category:
Original
Official Creator:
Type:
Doujinshi
Resolution:
1,800x1,308
Size:
499 kB
Views/Downloads:
223/8
Comments/Favorites:
3/0

Hi all, this is my third art work here. Erm.... and it is not good enuff too bcoz i jus leavethe background blank mayb next time i will add it. I used 2B+3B to draw it, and around 3 hours to complete it. So, pls drop any any comments to me THX ^^


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hmmm....:)
Not bad at all , the hair is done perfectly :D
The nose needs a little fixing and it's done ;)
The background u can draw night sky XD
+FAv

Wow, very nice, I like your style of drawing.
And I like the white background too,
I think its a good contrast with the black colour.

That's a pretty good job, with a good level of detail. Your shading is good, though you could have added more on the forehead (because of the hair). Also, i think that some of the face proportions are wrong, especially the space between the nose and the upper lip (it's usually wider than that, but it might be the perspective), and she has no cheek. A technical note as well, 3B is a bit too faint a pencil (i think that's what you used, like for the thing around her arm, it's a bit erased).
Otherwise, it really is a nice work, you have good drawing skills :)

Thumbs up :D

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