The shadows in the back need more work, they don't seem like they are correct or something, and are also way too smudgy. Otherwise, you have a nice vector, even if it's a tad too ecchi for my tastes. Oh and, I'd also try to make the gradients look less like gradients by painting over them.
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Well all i can say is im glad to be back walling again
its been awhile since my last submission but i have been attempting to finish a number of wallpapers all at once.id
start walling then , then put them aside due to work and my normal life
anyway here is my new piece.....Gun X Sword "wanna play"
the title says it all ...both Carmen and Fasalina seem so playful in this scene.... but we know what they are capable
of
lol
this whole wallpaper was completely VECTORED...no brushes this time
im very happy with the way it turned out actually
bg is a screencap from the anime Kiba...i think i got it from episede 37
i just extended the wall to the right ,created the different colored layers then played around with the sponge tool and
lighting effects and this is what i came up with
i think i have gone up a notch in my wallpaper skills if i do say so myself...lol
anyway any advise or criticism is welcome
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Nice work with the vectoring, you did a real good job with that. The shadows do seem a little weird...not sure what it is. But you've made a good wallpaper, regardless. Nice work.
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The extraction is really great :D
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I like this. looks really cool and simple - I adore simplicity XD
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ohhhh you make a wall with your vectors! :) Very nice though i will agree with bromithia. the shadows to the back are not looking like shadows when you are full viewing ... overall i like the simplicity of your wall and i think your vectors are the best! ;)
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very nice
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Simplicity is good, I do agree, good wallpaper!
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