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L-Kick Freeze

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L-Kick Freeze

By acid-awakening

 Original Doujinsh
© 2007 - 2008 ~ acid-awakening

acid-awakening
 
Submitted:
1y 20wk ago by acid-awakening
Category:
Original
Official Creator:
Type:
Doujinshi
Resolution:
1,316x1,120
Size:
443 kB
Views/Downloads:
242/8
Comments/Favorites:
6/1

Well, since recently I've been learning break dance I thought I'd draw something connected to it and also I haven't submitted anything in a while... I've decided to keep this one raw.

This one's called the L-Kick Freeze (as the title says)... Something I wish I could do, I'd probably break my arm by the time I could do that from all the practice. Quality kinda reduced at scan *yeah right ~ have a cry* lol, but actually the light coming from the scan kinda improved for the shadow.

"Where's the other arm?" I kinda stuffed it up in the process so I thought i'd hide it behind the leg.

Expressionless, yeah I know, Emptyness in the eyes... I suck at it so I cant fix that.
The body twist is actually performable. Proportion I guess i'm getting better.

Anyway ~ comments on improvements welcome.


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Looks good.
Seems like someone been practicing hard XD

Like the improvements here.
It's a long way back from the last one.
Here i see improvements in the fold-lines in the clothings, shadowing, and overall massing of the character.
It starting to show some depth and dimension to the character.

The stance looks convincing . though I'm not too sure with her right leg.
I feel that it is too closely drawn to the head.
I do like the expression on her face as well as her hair. It kinda work well with the stance. The hair kinda helps explain what she's doing

Nice work overall and good job on taking difficult stance.
Keep it up

break dance?wow thats cool,one of my friends used to do somthing like break dance and it attracted me.Thanks for sharing your informations and thats a cool L-KicK Freeze.Ooh! and about the drawing,i think you should draw the arm longer.

ewww not nice proportions try harder dude. why so blurry?

merged: 04-02-2007 ~ 08:07pm
although i must say how do u break dance? this drawing looks like u dislocated yr hip when u break. wow not bad can u teach me that skill? l-kick-freeze! whou kicks ass man!

I find it hard to see the details of the drawing with the filter on but it it looks pretty nice to me.

Yeah, the filter is kinda harsh, but the idea is cool!
Good luck with your dancing (don't break anything >_<)

The drawing looks great! good job on the position and the shading looks nice too. :)

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