the eye far back is too wide, the width is even larger than the one close, which is really wrong, and the eye
its'self is off the face
the next angle is weird too. Makes the shoulders flubbering all over the neck.
Artist Comment
hello everyone; another new submission from me.
this is for all the ninja fans out there!
i really enjoyed working on the pose on this character and i hope you'll enjoy it.
well, thats all i have to say, so please comment, critique and fave it if you are so kind.
thanks for reading.
~devilswing
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acid-awakening Apr 01, 2007
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pokomotto Apr 01, 2007
Quote by acid-awakeningthe eye far back is too wide, the width is even larger than the one close, which is really wrong, and the eye its'self is off the face
the next angle is weird too. Makes the shoulders flubbering all over the neck.there are bound to be mistakes, we're not mangakas ;)
however acid-awakening i dont think you should have been so harsh on that comment, especially when i dont think you could have done it yourself..keep up the goodwork devilswing:D
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Indee Apr 01, 2007
Great work! (^_^)
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ifonlyuknew Apr 01, 2007
for a ninja of darkness it sure is bright. nice job though.
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Bisuketto Apr 05, 2007
hmm no fighting guys XD..
Overall nice job. That pose is something reasonably different, such with the design.
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Soileyh May 15, 2009
wow you submitted a lot of originals... if u aspire to be a mangaka, keep it up!
I looked around at your other works as well. I think you have mastered the body proportions and pose well; you just have to brush up on the facial parts. Overall, good job!
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