the arm looks ok to me

also, I love typical drawing of unproper group pic which only shows half bodies and lame poses, so please contribute

sorry if my comments and the auto-favs doesn't help you that much but... if really you want an advice to make this pic better, well... the blue/green haired girl should be "groping" the other girl ;p

omg. what are you saying? Your "stuff" more like real work of art, are just supper supper creativ and nice! hehe. never say that. This one is still very original looking, and i also Just LOVE your cg coloring. Your characters are as always very interesting, and cool looking. Adds to favs! ^^ hehe. later.

wow the colors are great especailly now that its soon coming into summer because it reminds me of a summer wallpapaer!

Lovely job rythem! I always love seeing your "duo" poses... and this one is especially playful and cute! I like the pink haired girl... (though red eyes are a little scary... ). I think that the arm length is fine as well since you've got the blue haired girl leaning slightly. Really, your work is very high quality (as always). Keep it up!

i didn't even thought of the groping thingie until you mentioned it :p
it's wonderful as usual of course -.- i really like how you use differents sorts of pretty patterns! *o*

all your works are fantastic. being abl;e to operate a tablet in this manner is no mean feat gj:D

Damn you!
This is awesome. The arms look fine and I love the hair! So pretty
Keep up the good work and I hope to see a more-than-two-people-in-a-group doujin soon!

I like how you always are colourwise with good fashion but sometimes I think the eyes you create looks too deep with the colours like that.
But anyway,... very well done

eeeEE.... so cute!
awesome colouring, awesome work...

I agree with what you said rythem-san, hehe... It's so typical-- typically you, coz that's your style! Yeah I think you should draw more group pics rather than just 2 people. Good luck with that! As for this doujin, its cute, just like your other works... Why not try a different style?

I love the colors, thy're so cool
and, of course, I <3 your art

long time no see, ne?

lovely as always. the arms doesnt look long from my point of view. the colors and the overall theme of the work is cute and fluffy. your artwork and talent never ceases to amaze me. great job!

buy all your art if I can. It is way too cute.

hehehehehehe... rythem... theyre so adorable! Great job! me likey! :P

lol long time no see yr artwork GOOD JOB! MAN U ROCK how u able to do e detail so well? dang yr girls are cute><

sucha great draw.. luvly.. barely flawless.. nice goin' my friend

nice drawing u haf there.. i dun think the hand is too long.. seems perfect

awww~ how cutez . I think u got it right when u say ur piccuus are cliched ~~ they are ~ but its never anything wrong with drawing cliched artworks ..huhuhuh ~ do I sound sarcastic? huhuhu...

the girl with the pink hair looks nice, but If I were to make up a personality for her , I'd say she's a crybaby ~ yes she ishhh ~ ~ huhu ... her hands look a lil weird , but not enough to cringe at *_* . the other girl looks very typical and ordinary~ huhuhu .. nice blue outlines though. ...just ...the bg... you've done so many bgs like that , its getting too boring to look at . add more colours please , and more things ... all in all , an A- piccu . you could do way better than drawing average piccies , neechan thinks soo +_+ ~ *nodsnods*