your artwork is amazing. i like the shading very much! +fav

very cool. nice pencil work, good body propotions.
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great work as always, very very beautiful image.

Ooh... Love the clothes. Nice doujin! The shading is great, plus its really clean, not messy. Oh, did your sister draw it? And edited by you?

Tell your sis she has a good posture done here and that the clothing is quite unique although I think the sword is a bit too thin -- even the handle
Shading is quite good too however the sock, foot thing (the lowest point of the girl) is a little bit too twisted

That's quite a drawing she did here... guess that's a family trait or something ^_^. Anyway, i really like the girl stance, as well as the clothes design. The sketch would still need a little cleaning, but otherwise it's very good. Give her the thumbs up

one word...AWESOME!