I will say this, you have a very...interesting way of drawing. Background is very pleasant and peaceful and the scenery is quite nice. Not too bad if I do say so myself. Keep up the good work ^^.
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Today was the first really warm day, so I was feeling spring-like. Character is named Angel, from my defunct webcomic. I haven't drawn anything in a while, been busy with work, so this was a nice return to drawing for me. Might not be as good as much of the artwork on minitokyo, but I figured I'd throw it out there and see if I could get some (preferably constructive) criticism and suggestions.
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CyanideBlizzard Retired Moderator Mar 11, 2007
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kaisui1tatsu Mar 11, 2007
The background is pretty decent, but you really need to work on the character. Her hair line is way to far back, so it looks like she has a really bad receding hairline. The actual hair structure is pretty nice, you just need to bring the bangs down. Also, it would look more deminsional if you made her right eye smaller than the left one, and the hand (when it is open) is the same size of the face porportionally, so her hand is pretty small as well. Her dress is pretty good, the fold lines could be more flowing, but that isn't that big of an issue. And it would be more 'spring' like if you added some color. She looks more like winter. Well, that is my constructive critizism! I hope that it helps you. (I am very sorry if I seemed really blunt)
It is a very good attempt though, she is more than what some people can do. Keep up the work! *waves*
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