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Original Doujinshi

Waiting for you=--

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Waiting for you=--

By rika23

 Original Doujinsh
© 2007 - 2008 ~ rika23

rika23
 
Submitted:
1y 25wk ago by rika23
Category:
Original
Official Creator:
Type:
Doujinshi
Resolution:
1,612x2,290
Size:
421 kB
Views/Downloads:
366/16
Comments/Favorites:
5/8

Kyah~
Yo again all..XD

well, this is about girl,she waiting for "him" to meet her,
so that she can confess her love to him,

Her expression, it supposed to be nervous.
but i dont know how to do that lol
But i just make her smile, to show that she cant wait him to come.

Oh,you see the love flew to her,
That is her guardian XD

The balcony and the floor
is not that good, because i'm aint good in drawing those thing >_<

He is Coming! XD
See the shadow at there beside her, see shoes?
XD
He came for her,
Ganbate XD

Bye~

sakura--cb wings-lovers
celestial-luminesse feathers-of-eternity
free-wallers kawaii-doujin-playground


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A bit rough... paper doll look alike
good ideas... a bit messy on her hair or wings whatever that big afro like thing behind her is.
Looks much too rushed... same with the hand and fingers on the bars.
I downloaded to take a closer look and from what I can see... It looks like:
I'm guessing that it took about perhaps 30-40 minutes to do? please correct me if i'm wrong but most of it is rushed like I have explained before, hands, afro, skirt.
Seeing how there are less sketch lines than the hair does... it looks too done quickly. Know what I mean? You rushed the picture... When I said it looked 30-40 minutes... that's not including the time you put into thinkin of a scene. Spending 20 minutes more on correction etc could make the appearance a whole lot nicer. Take your time.

Aw it adorable^__^ i love her eyes and the hearts great job !

do you want me to quote this one too? Hey when did you draw 0.o!

Ejmmmm... ejm..... Good and SO original... *lol*
O_o

Chia-chan

That's a really good drawing, and adorable as well ^^ I love the eyes, those look so sweet <3 and the hairstyle is cute too. ^^

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