well, the bg pattern was reatly chosen...
about the chara... what's the name?
well,on the point, I thnk the eyes sould be more round, tey look a little square...
te hear should be a little up...
the lineart i great, you did an exelent jon... I just think that yo should hava added more shadows to the forehead,
there is hair, but no shadow.
I guess the had is little big, or it's the hand tha's small...
Even so, it's beautyful and clean. You have my vote.