A very nice first submission amaya06! I like the organization of your piece-- we get to see two different views of your character! I like the way that you did the lining of her hair. I've got a couple of tips though. The first thing I saw was that in her portrait image her nose is a little crooked. Just straighten that out a bit and she'd be perfect. Also, watch out for inconsistencies in pen thickness when you are outlining. One spot that I can see is her shirt collar in the portrait image. As for her full body shot, watch out for the shading. There is one fold in her skirt that shows the blue line even though it is a shadow. Also, with that same fold, watch out how high you shade. (unless her skirt is made up of individual flaps from her waistline... ^_^') Overall, a great first submission! Hope to see more from you in the future! :)
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Ummmmmm.....This is my first scan on this site......wooo.....tell me what u think! ^)^
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fireflywishes Retired Moderator Feb 13, 2007
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Imoen Feb 14, 2007
I like it.....
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