the drawing looks very good, but the place where her arms cross is a bit strange
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Kiako Jan 05, 2007
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fireflywishes Retired Moderator Jan 06, 2007
Nice job on this doujin fury-san! You did a really nice job on the lines and especially her hair. The only things I would say to work on would be her hands. The hand she is laying her head on seems to be an awkward position. The palm part of her hand seems too long. If you made it shorter (thus moving her fingers closer to her eye) it would look a little better. I would also agree with what Kiako said about where her arms cross looking a little awkward as well. But it's still a nicely drawn doujin. I would love to see this in color! Keep up the good work! :D
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akari-chan Jan 10, 2007
really lovely and cute drawing, fury! Although her left hand looks sorta big, but everything else looks really good! you drew the folds in her clothes really good, i'm really bad at drawing folds in clothes.n +fav and keep up your excellent work!
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