That's pretty sweet stuff, but as for constructive criticism i can't really offer any as i dont really have any idea as far as the medium goes. But all i can say is maybe define the hair better maybe? *shrugs* and the markings on her face, but that'll probably come with the final stage anyway
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This is the first stage of a piece I started today to demonstrate better what I do to complete a watercolored doujin.
This took about three hours to sketch out and shade using an hb and 2h pencils. To tell the truth, I really like this
version and am reluctant to do anything further to it but THAT is the feeling you should have before moving to the
coloring stage. :o
The next stage (the final stage) will be along soon--should take another couple of hours (I'm already an hour into
it)--
Anyway, I hope you like it and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is always appeciated. ^_^'
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wow thats sick! form the top of your head?
(the neck is a bit too wide for a girl, make it thinner) -
Quote by johann12345wow thats sick! form the top of your head?
(the neck is a bit too wide for a girl, make it thinner)
NAW! ^_^' I got this from a scan although I altered it just a bit. :nya:
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