Original Doujinshi
GIRL TEN
GIRL TEN
By KOKUJINDESU
- Submitted:
- 1y 39wk ago by KOKUJINDESU
- Category:
- Original
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- Type:
- Doujinshi
- Resolution:
- 850x1,111
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- 977 kB
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- 307/13
- Comments/Favorites:
- 3/6
I had been trying to get this picture right for a week--this is this best I can
do.
I excercised color discipline and kept it mostly black and white.
It's watercolor and pencils (hb, 2h and 6b).
It is slightly ecchi--it's just a quirk of mine.
I also kept the girl simple to allow attention to leave the face and go along
the whole form.
Enjoy
*polite bow*
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Hum, nice one... i like the blush (^_^'). Nice coloring, and the lines are neat as well. The clothing is awesome, with really good shading on it.
One thing though, the lines of her arms are a bit thin (in the exterior part, compared to the thicker inner part), and her arms are a bit too "plain", withouth any details (like we can't exactly figure where the elbow is for exemple).
Anyway, good job (i loove her big eyes
), and
thumbs up 
Dude this is really good, one of the best ive seen so far. I like the kanji on her back too artist has to put their name somewhere
The
arm comment i think is valid, i assume you were showing shading though, as the
way its done shows reflected light ?
I dont know about showing color discipline, go nuts, you will find yourself faster that way
You
wont necessarily produce stuff your totally happy with at first, but in the long
run i think its a better way to work.
Awesome work, your inspiring me to pick up a pencil again.
Domo Arigato gozaimasu for the comments-I really appreciate it!
Her lightly done arms is reflected light but I also left it de-emphacized to weight the picture toward the shaded portions. It's all about taste and choices.
Color disclipline was a decision I started out with (to make the piece nearly monochromatic) so it's not so much a restriction as it was a chosen style choice.
Thasnks for the input--now , pick up that pencil!