The lighting on the character doesn't match the scenery at all. In fact there is no lighting on the character at all! The scenery shows a very strong light source in the center of the image creating the sharp shadows on the columns, yet the girl is evenly lit throughout. With such a strong light source, you would expect the girl to be almost entirely in shadow with minimal lighting moving across her body from left to right creating a sort of glow effect.
The same is true for the birds. Also, they look really, really large - the perspective is very strange. The birds in the center are almost as large as the girl yet they appear to be behind the girl, which should actually make them smaller (as they are further away from the viewer). Also, slight color variances in each bird would help make them separate entities instead of a single multi-bird blob. And the glow around them separates them far too much from the background - they just float above the background instead of being integrated.

[h]Ello
I like this wallpaper because I think abut it in other way, that Tama-Neko does. I think about this girl and bird as something from fantasy word, something unreal, ghost's, mirage.... Something like that, with this work I have such feeling, that they are very, very far away, even when thay are so near and huge. The background looks really nice. That smuge.... it could be WIND in our imagination ^^ In mine. ^^ And what about light? Tama-Neko has right and doesn't have it at same tiome. All depends of our imagination. I wonder... does this wallie be a realistic work? hmm... I haven't write such long post months :p
Let me tell you one more time: I like this work, as it is. Have a nice week

hmmm nice work but some shadings need to be done.

Oh,I really like this!

It's so.... Different. I don't know what it is about it that I like, but I do like it. ^_^

Fav.

MY GOD...it is beautiful
i am seroiusly enchanted now! and captivated and mesmerized!
+ fav for sure!

Well, I'm not an expert in art but I think this is a great one. I would rather a colorful wallie, but even in this, with not so many colours, I think is very good.

Thanks!

wow, i love the colours you used and the background looks really nice i love how you composed everything nice wall~^^

I do like it. It reminds me .. of a picture of somesort. Kinda like a painting. And you know what .. i really enjoy the light, the brightness. It's something different and i like it for that Good job

awesome! nice work!

cool. i noticed ur gallery is full of this sort of tenshi work. good work there...ok EDIT: im wrong its not tenshi work, just looked like it from the thumbnail =)

woo o.o good job, I like your wall thanks for sharing!nn

Wpw...that's so pretty! Your style is just so amazing! I love the colors and the cool effects. Awesome job, nightstar3! ^^ Keep it up and thank for sharing! ^^

very nice work

I liked this wallpaper from the moment I saw it ^^
Amazing background, I'm still trying to figure out what you did
Anyway, excellent wallpaper, my fav for sure!

i luv it..i luv the scan and also the colours u use here are awesome..
i love everything here!
congrats

All your walls are amazing, but this one is specially good. Everything fit so well Thanks for sharing!

I like its colour, it's beatiful one! .

Beautiful colors and textures. Also love the way the light comes in. ^_^-b

The background is really very beautiful! To some parts it left you with your mouth open . . . i really really like the work you have done. The only strange is the lighting, it seems like it has pass the character without touching her . . . otherwise i think it is an excellent work.
Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

i like the light detail, but i think her pose is kind of awkward. anyway, it looks cool to me because she looks transparent...good job!

hmm.. not sure about the rest.. but i kinds like this wallie from what i've seen... the BG is great.. That's typical of knightstar3.. You like to make wallie of such texture and i rally like that alot.. About the light part, i think that since strong light is shining from the left.. maybe you can create some shadows or make her abck looks darker.. that'll make the trick.. ^^ I kinda think that the scan and the BG blended very together.. great job on that.. i like it alot.. thanx for sharing an awesome piece of work..

I love the background! The shadowing seems a bit off though... like the girl should be a bit darker, she looks a little drowned out. I still love it though! ^_^

hey! i really like this wallpaper, but for some reason i cant decide why i like it so much. i think i like how nothing has much color, except for her eyes which stick out with their bright red... i also like the strange light that seems to eminate from everything! thanks so much for sharing this!

oh,, good...