it's nice
the charector's face is a bit weird or maybe it's just like that in a the preview version
i like your flames
and her costume is good
Artist Comment
Well...I drew this yesterday. XD And also this picture took me 4-5 hours of sketching. As you can see, I love Archers and Fire. xDDD
And sooo it took me a long time drawing the costume on her and the bow design plus the fire took me a long time. <.<;;
Well...feel free to give comments, critics, etc. I would appreciate it though. =]
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pikac Nov 07, 2006
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levezzali Nov 07, 2006
It's nice!
Her hands are a bit strange, and the fire around her left arm is too messed with the lineart, you should make thinner lines and wider spaces to make the fire. The movemant is good, and the expression could have been better, but her face is ok. I liked the clothing and ... well.... braids... I l-o-v-e braided hair, so you won me with that, congrats Akane!
- Leo
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pegassuss Nov 07, 2006
Nice doujin! ^^ I like the design of the character, her face looks ok and I like her hair. The design of her clothes and arch is really nice and the amount of detail is nice. The lines could be a bit cleaner though, and there are some proportions problems, like for example her right arm is longer then her left arm. Her hands are bit weird, and the fire looks ok. Good job! ^^ Keep it up.
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devilswing Nov 12, 2006
well, she seems kind of stiff and shes sorta out of proportion if you know what i mean. i like the folds of her costume though. good luck in the doujinshi contest!
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Koboshi93 Nov 19, 2006
i like her ahire and her costume but the arms are stange
fire look good too
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ShinLanceVulcano Jun 01, 2007
I like fire too, but I'd prefer a samurai... It is not a complain though, your work is really good, keep it up!
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