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dun really know what to say... except that I don't really like the end result that much >__<

oh btw.. looks better in PREVIEW, so don't waste your downloads :D

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Comments

  1. bromithia Retired Moderator Nov 04, 2006

    lol, nice. I like the clouds on the bottom.

  2. candy-chan Retired Moderator Nov 04, 2006

    ...
    what brom said

    XD

  3. skye Nov 05, 2006

    it does look nice. i agree about the clouds ^^

  4. dothaithanh Nov 05, 2006

    WOW i really like this style :D
    lineart and dark fill

  5. euna Retired Moderator Nov 05, 2006

    It's not bad. You're being hard on yourself. ;)
    Yeah, those clouds are great and you've got a nice style. ^^

  6. Regenbogen Nov 05, 2006

    Yes, it's quite good actually. I like the look of the face... the eyes. And like the others said already the clouds are a great idea... make it more interesting. I'm not sure whether the gradient for the background is necessary. But I guess you've played around with the options... I was thinking that if the whole background was just white the effect of the clouds would be even better. Now like this the clouds part is a bit more "split off". So if all was just white it would be more extreme I think... Well I am not sure whether anyone can understand what I'm trying to put into words here. *lol* So I'll better stop saying that I have not regretted downloading your doujin! ^^
    Looking forward to your next submissions!

  7. Zefie Nov 05, 2006

    simple but effective ~ really like your art style, your character design is very lovely. the expression of the character is quite sad, especially can see it from those beautiful eyes. hair looks very neat too, like the way you used only black and white for the character. lining is very clean and well done. from the colouring shadings comes very prettily to be seen ^_^ the cloud effect on the bottom gives very nice finished look for the drawing yet it's great idea as many have said before. like the way white colour goes grayish when going more downward. but it makes the clouds very dark and from that way it emphasize the sad feeling of the atmosphere, because grayness in the clouds reminds of rain. overall really clean and neat work ! thank you for sharing and keep up the great work !

  8. pikac Nov 06, 2006

    i like your outlining,
    speciatly the neatly drawn hair and the details on it,
    the sad look on the charector adds a nice touch
    the coat is too black though,
    you could have shown the outlining of the interior a bit,
    or maybe it's just like that in the smaller version,
    anyway good job

  9. GaiJiN Nov 06, 2006

    Haha every artist is his own worst critic xD This is definitely nice, great work on negative space. I like that expression and the hair has a nice flow to it. To answer the previous post, imho the coat is just fine, adding to it would kill the picture. The style reminds me of an artist I really enjoy --> a naught

  10. mechanical-angel Nov 10, 2006

    nice. ^^

  11. Toya999 Jan 17, 2007

    amazing doujinshi!
    great work!

  12. yui20 Jun 13, 2007

    This looks so cool >.< ~
    Amazing doujin !

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