Another awesome doujin Amy! I like all of the details (her hat!) and the soft colors really go well together. I'm not quite sure about that cut-out part on her dress... it makes her body position seen awkward somehow... Either that or the line from her boob is creating that effect. Well, it's a lovely doujin overall! Keep up the great work!
(As for submitting "My Geisha"... I think there's a submission cap-- 3 per day? So if you wait a bit you might be able to submit it then...)